Short Story: A girl who was Strong

This short story is about a girl who was a pillar of strength but wondered if being strong was a good thing. Read to see how it ends!

Tall Apartment building in a short story

This short story is based on real events and the echoes in my mind after hearing this story, transformed themselves into words which make this story.

She returned home from the hospital amidst the stillness of the afternoon. This weekly visit was an irritating necessity.

Her home was an eleventh-floor apartment in a posh society, easily worth a couple of crores. It never mattered much to her. Money, she thought was a useless pursuit, like relationships, love, and life. She liked these lines from a blog she had read recently

She had a comforting relationship with her parents and was living with them since her divorce a decade ago. She was strong, something she had learnt to be. Though sometimes she wondered if strength was a good thing.

She had found solace in her fitness regime. Last week, she invited an evening walk acquaintance, “Join me at the gym, noon every day. I’ve shed 10 kgs already.”

She rested for a while after coming back home from the hospital, and then engaged in a conversation with her parents. It was brief and she responded to their queries with a detachment in her tone. “What did the doctor say?” her parents asked. “Usual, he asked me how I was feeling”, she replied. Any changes in medication? They inquired. “No, the usual” she dismissed. She was used to the anxiety in her parents’ voice and always presented a calm face in front of them.  

Her parents were murmuring to each other and suddenly they heard a piercing scream followed by a deafening thud. The echoes of the scream and the words lingered in their mind, “I’ll be in the balcony”, she had told them.  


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Author: karanshorey

Karan is a passionate individual who constantly dreams of changing the world for good. An avid reader and a reluctant writer, he is a firm believer in Grace (and bit of sun signs too!). The name of this blog is reflective of his keen interest in the planetary influences on human behaviour. At 32, he has a bit of a many facets (Versatile!), among those, a human resource professional being the most prominent. This space is a reflection and collection of his thoughts, designed with an intention to foster more thoughts, some of which, hopefully, will fuel the engine of change the world deserves! Professionally, Karan has trained and mentored well over thousand students and helped them in improving their communication skills, personality and readiness for job interviews. You can get in touch with him on shorey.karan@gmail.com for any assignments. Connect with me on twitter @karanshorey

3 thoughts on “Short Story: A girl who was Strong”

  1. Priti – I, a teacher, dreamer, imaginative personality, feel life deeply and try to express it through my writing.
    Priti says:

    What happened to her?

  2. karanshorey – Karan is a passionate individual who constantly dreams of changing the world for good. An avid reader and a reluctant writer, he is a firm believer in Grace (and bit of sun signs too!). The name of this blog is reflective of his keen interest in the planetary influences on human behaviour. At 32, he has a bit of a many facets (Versatile!), among those, a human resource professional being the most prominent. This space is a reflection and collection of his thoughts, designed with an intention to foster more thoughts, some of which, hopefully, will fuel the engine of change the world deserves! Professionally, Karan has trained and mentored well over thousand students and helped them in improving their communication skills, personality and readiness for job interviews. You can get in touch with him on shorey.karan@gmail.com for any assignments. Connect with me on twitter @karanshorey
    karanshorey says:

    Unfortunately, she isn’t alive anymore

  3. KK – Kaushal Kishore (KK) is an MBA, MA, and CAIIB with over 35 years of experience in the Banking sector. He has led many technical and commercial teams in delivering project management solutions. He played a key role in the merger of State Bank of Indore and all other Associate Banks, Bharatiya Mahila Bank, and SBICI with SBI. From a solution perspective, Kaushal focuses on best practices and has worked towards risk identification and mitigation, processes, and control improvements. The functions covered by him include wholesale and retail lending, treasury operations, trade finance, cash management services, custody operations, etc. He has also played a key role in merchant acquiring business. Why One More Blog??? This world is full of ideas, ideals, thoughts, stories, anecdotes, and so on, As a tiny creature of this vast universe, I too have, Some unique, Some similar to others, And some probably inspired by my elders, Some sweet, some bitter, Sometimes spicy too, Some close to heart, Some closer to mind, Sharing of the same, May be of some value to others, Most of the targeted audience however, May not possibly come across, But I have to bring the same in black and white, No, no, it’s not कीड़ा Wriggling to come out of me, Neither literary diarrhoea nor mental indigestion, It’s rather my responsibility to share my experiences, What I have received from this great society, What I have felt about it, And how I was dealt with, Will attempt to download what has been uploaded throughout the life, Before, yes before… my memory may start fading away, Before L of YOLO (You Only Live Once) comes to an end, Else, the whole thing will go away, Unsaid, unlettered, unsung…sheer waste, Let others get some ideas, To make their L a bit better, It’s up to them, Let me do my part…
    KK says:

    So sad!

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